hey readers
It is another day of lock down. Are you having fun ? Today my class and I did a DLO. If you don't know what DLO stands for, for digital learning object. We could do a DLO about any animal I chose, a Goldfish . So first we had to learn about our animal and collect some data. Then we could create a slide, video, animation and more by the way I chose slides . Then we had to share our information and that was our learning creating and sharing and I am going to share some facts with you. Did you know that the longest living Goldfish was 43 years old and if you have a Goldfish it wont even quarter that long sad news right and if you have an interesting fact about Goldfish please write it in the comments and that is it for my blog.
Hi Hajira,
ReplyDeleteI Like Your Topic For Your DLO.It Reminds Me Of My Topic, Zebras!Maybe Next Time You Could Make Your Sentences A Little Short.Otherwise I Love It!
thank you for the feedback
DeleteKia ora Hajira,
ReplyDeleteIts me Asmah again from haypark school. This is an amazing blog. Some of your commas and full stops are in the wrong place. Just letting you know check your work before you post it, because when you were explaining what DLO was you wrote, If you don't know what DLO stands for, for digital learning object. Can you see the 2 mistakes. if you do then update this post fix the mistakes then publish it again find all your mistakes. Telling you these 2 mistakes incase you can't find them the comma is in the wrong place and you have written for 2 times. Good job though, keep up the good work and stay safe.